frost

A Poem by annie lee

tanka

like piles of snow up

against the back door -- the wind

swirls the icy flakes

into little pirouettes

diamond flakes flashing

in the winter sun.

the words i want to say pile

up against that door

all i can do is look away and

close my eyes to dream of spring

© 2013 annie lee

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Sami Khalil

I do love this too. Perfect writing...:)

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

The Verse: A Poetry Jou..

I love this, excellent. the flow, its playfulness. Superb writing. Honest.

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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on July 23, 2013
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annie lee

Prunedale, CA

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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience. I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..