losing track of the magic

I thought I could make

it all happen. I thought I

could make magic from

my dreams.  I thought I could spin

a cloth of such brilliance that

all would marvel and

be stunned to stand in its light.

I have willed wonder

into existence before.

but not this time, old girl, not now.

Reviews

[Angi]

The magic is not gone, it is just playing hide and seek with you. Chin up, girlie. Chin up. Angi~

[annie lee]

yes, having multiple chinz does require adaption.

[Angi]

Oh man. Are you ok tonight??

[annie lee]

I'm fine. I had a very rare "Lost Thursday Night" (Like "Lost Weekend") and I am carefully observing the crime scene.

[Frieda P]

Sounds like someone is having a bad day, not sure what precipitated this one, but we can't always do wonders, your brilliance is most apparent minichinz! Old? Pfft!

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

Who you calling old;) Certainly a little wonder and magic in this piece. Despite, its statement of frustration, I found it oddly uplifting.

[annie lee]

Thank you. I wanted to leave the reader with a sense of "Don't stop trying." Because if you fail at a task, that is only one failure. The magic has worked plenty of times before.

[MOON]

Deep write we can all make magic happens surely? Yet sometimes it eludes. Lovely write.

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[despitegreathands]

This is heavy. But totally why I'm writing my story now. I feel like if I don't do it now I'll never get the chance to again. This poem is so motivating.

[annie lee]

Thanks you for reading.

[Heather Burns]

sometimes magic happens, sometime it just doesn't Maybe next time it will catch. this is well written and with plenty of magic.

[annie lee]

Many thanks to you. I have been very fortunate in my life, and sometimes it felt magic.

[Sami Khalil]

You are writing magical writes I can tell you that is a marvel indeed...I can feel that you are little frustrated about losing your magic touch but as long as you have it within you are the queen...:)

[annie lee]

You are too kind. Thank you.