tanka 11

A Poem by annie lee

soft cherry blossoms

barely pink, crazily gnarled

cypress trees, misty

monterey morning, long gray

fog fingers caress the bay

© 2013 annie lee

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I really like the imagery you created - one can easily picture your words. The scheme and the words were chosen with care, I think. Good one.

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annie lee

Prunedale, CA

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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience. I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..