uncoordinated

rengo -- sometimes all is not in sync.

 

somewhere, he and she,

somehow, they missed connections:

she caught the early

train; she loved when he did not.

she was passionate when he

was merely, mildly

interested.  she was wild

when he was restrained.

now she’s at the end of the line,

gathering her baggage,

chalking all this up

to experience, liking

her new strength, she turns

to go, meets his eyes:  full of

realized love.  no  . . .  oh, no.

 

 

 

Reviews

[Pryde Foltz]

Oh...been there sister. I laughed at the last lines. You said so much with that oh,no. What's a girl to do, hey? What's a girl to do? Loved this.

[Rita L. Sev]

Love is not enough... there must be a connection. It is hard for some people to realize this, but without that completion of yin and yang, a relationship will stagnate, no matter how much you want it to...

[Sami Khalil]

We all go through missed oppurtunities to connect properly or have the right lines of communication. When we grow older things become more focused and we realize things in a new light or dimension...A splendid read and write...:)

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)

[Mockingbird]

i know what it's like to be on that side of a so-called relationship. there's always that one that makes you weak in the knees no matter how much you think you learned your lesson. excellent poem.

[annie lee]

Thank you very much.