Senryu: chasing happiness

the pursuit that the Constitution guarantees us

 

tiny gulps of joy,

brief gasps of exultation:

all you can hope for.

Reviews

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nicely done...because in between the tiny gups we thirst for things to get better, and in between the exultation, we choke on what is going wrong..brief glimpses of what could be..they all shatter..

we better take in those tiny gulps as we can now...they will be gone soon.

[annie lee]

So right -- it is catch as catch can these days. But I am becoming wonderfully comfortable in this retirement thing, fine-tuning a butt-groove that Homer Simpson would envy.

[Laminators Dubai]

right, thats all we hope for lee.

so simple yet splendid.
thank you so much for this marvel.

[annie lee]

Thank you, glitch.

[Frieda P]

Wow that really hit the spot....you nailed this one annie.

[annie lee]

Thank you, Frieda.

[Pryde Foltz]

You might call this drowning. Great senyru. You go the knack.

[annie lee]

Thank you, Pryde.

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful senryu...:)....

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)