tanka 16

A Poem by annie lee

make impossible

promises, wild passionate

promises; and i

won’t hold you to them. it’s good

merely to hear promises.

© 2013 annie lee

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Lydia Shutter

Yes, it is.....we can hitch our stars to a promise, can't we? Well written Tanka. Lydi**

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

Thank you, Lydia.

Sami Khalil

Promise that you keep writing good poems like this one...Bravo...:>)..............

Posted 12 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

12 Years Ago

I'll try, Sami. Thanks for your kind words.

12 Years Ago

You are welcome...:>)

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annie lee

Prunedale, CA

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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience. I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..