monterey november

rengo

 

a cold front has moved

through, and the wind is gusting

out to the ocean,

stirring up the whitecaps and

chilling the sunlight; gray clouds

crowd the horizon.

soon the rainy season will

be upon us, and

hopeful croaks of the frogs will

turn to choruses of joy.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I remember the Monterey days of fall and winter. I spend three years at old Fort Ord in 1992-1994. I suicide boarded a dozen Winter storms. The good description took me to good places and memories. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Sami Khalil]

Wonderful how you transition us and prepare us for the change of the seasons with just few words. You are a great writer...:)

[annie lee]

Thank you for the praise, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

MY pleasure...:)

[John Alexander McFadyen]

You have described the very fundamental of the weather in Monterey in November in a short engaging piece.

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Laminators Dubai]

November !
so detailed and thoughful with such coolness _[°°]_*

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Pryde Foltz]

I like it, a lot. It seems reminiscent of another piece of your, only instead of frogs there were tourists. Or did I dream that.

[annie lee]

no I did have one that talked about tourists. But that was a summertime one. We get some really chilly weather in June and sometimes July. The fog, of course, is a constant.

[Pryde Foltz]

There we go... Was a memorable piece