soft morning

rengo

 

this morning the crows

and bluejays are noisily

fussing in the fog

shrouded green thicket behind

the gazebo.  hummingbirds

are delirious

with joy as they flit quickly

from fuchsia blossom

to fuchsia blossom.   I can

hear a dog bark now and then,

one of those “Listen,

I'm out here by myself and

this is a big world

so I’ll bark in my deepest

tones so I can feel brave” barks.

And then just at this

minute, someone's car alarm

blurts out raucously

into the crystal morning

air;  I can’t help but giggle.

Reviews

[Tom]

The unnatural sound of the car alarm spoiled the harmonious tones of mother-nature's rhapsody!

A blissful delight !

[Night]

I feel myself sinking into the poem. What a delicious morning you paint! Great job!

[Rita L. Sev]

A vivid auditory description of morning, wonderfully crafted, Annie! I love the image of that trying-to-sound-brave dog! :)

[annie lee]

Thank you, Rita. Since we moved here, I have fallen in love with the rural sounds: the chickens, the horses across the road gently whinnying, the peregrines that hatched in our green belt a couple of years ago and all the variety of dogs and their choruses.

[Sami Khalil]

You have captured those moments wonderfully. I felt trasnported into the scenes...A great job...:)

[annie lee]

Thanks, Sami.

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)..................

[Coyote Poetry]

I like the soft mornings. Good to hear alive and well. The good description create good vision and places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[annie lee]

Thank you.

[Laminators Dubai]

that's call a beautiful morning and you.did really nice job!
everything is awesome here``
thanks for sharing^^

[annie lee]

Thank you.