fit

A Poem by annie lee

big wooden puzzles

tiny pudgy fingers

struggling to find the piece

that fits

fingers grow

no longer tentative

but still struggling

to find the piece

that fits

© 2014 annie lee

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Woody

so little said! but it speaks volumes. delightful.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zahra

Creative idea, brief but nicely described. Very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Zahra

Creative idea, brief but nicely described. Very nice

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Sami Khalil

Pieces fit together for certain reasons, others don't. Puzzles are that way too...A splendid poem...:)..................

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Pryde Foltz

It is our fingers that give our brains most of its agency. I feel the pain in this write. Brava.

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Lyn Anderson

This is full of imagery and double meanings. A real delight.:)

Posted 11 Years Ago

1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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Added on February 5, 2014
Last Updated on February 5, 2014

Author

annie lee

Prunedale, CA

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I'm a tough old broad who spent almost 30 years at Ma Bell, and that is high level training for surviving in the jungle. Thank you for your patience. I am retired from the Unix and Linux world, but w.. more..