Rain

We all feel alone sometimes

As gravity pulls down the rain on my window , like the rain my tears also fall

Then hit the ground , then it means nothing

Sun comes out . and shines down on me . showing me a little hope

Friends come around trying to pick me of the ground , some has seen my tears

but others come and disappear , pushing me back in my fears .

Similes come and go. Mostly like rain and the winter snow .

But as i cry new hope grows inside . Showing me a new way to that shining light of hope.

Author's Note

Hope u like it as much as i do

Reviews

[To be scene To be heard..]

I love this write I also have a poem called rain with the same picture thats what drawn me to read it's so great I love your use of the rain in this lovely poem.

[Alexus Shanae]

I like this alot, im impressed.

[Nancy]

I like this very much, there's a lot of feeling in this.

[Destiny]

I really like this poem. You're really good!