A Disconnection of Hearts

I wrote this a long time ago. Twist ending!

 

I'm taken in again

your hostage, your victim

blind is the feeling of your heart on mine

This hot silence that dances around us

dulls my need to hold on, but I cling

not to a structured thought

not to doubt

but to you hear now.

This scent of home, taste of comfort

softly serenades me and I'm yours,

yours for the moment,

until your hers.

Author's Note

I'm not sure about the punctuation in this one. I tried to make is as effective as possible.

Reviews

[closed..acct]

An Amazing write you have written.
Excellent write.

[Mehul Rwat]

You're going fine if you are new..
If not than put in a little more effort...
The effort is excellent...

[Sidewalk]

Do you know michael scott?

[Distant horizons]

Excellent write. Really like this.

[Joel Moore]

great write, it's short but has a lot of imagery, the ending was very good.

[luna11]

Great poem :D
I think the punctuation is fine.
xx