My Love

Your eyes are the moonlight to my night, your laugh the sun to my day,
You are the insertion to every thing I do, at first I would ignore you, and
Now I just adore you. You are my inspiration, you are my love.

© 2012 destroyedhappines

Author's Note

Please comment on how i can improve my poetry. i am twelve so keep the comments appropriate to my age group. to see this poem and some of my others, go to Unitedworldpoets.com and search for 458italia as one word. Thx!

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....	sweet and lovely, nice job! Posted 13 Years Ago sweet and lovely, nice job! Rating /100

tanaya

Short and sweet! XD

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on February 16, 2012
Last Updated on February 19, 2012

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destroyedhappines

royal oak, MI

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I am a twelve year old from the east side of detroit. now dont think for a second my poems are inmature, because in almost all of my poems i eather relece my dark and depressed side or write about ang.. more..