The Prince

Just me trying to figure out why I don't have parapraphs when I submit things.

There was a prince who declared that his word shall be law.


"All shall give the prince gift on the first of each month!"


He next declared that he be married to a girl of his choosing and he married a girl three days later.He then declared that adultry be punished by death.He did this to stop his wife from being disloyal.


The next day,however,he maet a girl with shiny eyes,and silky hair and he the night with her.The next day he was captured by his wife and imprisoned.


"All adultry shall be punished by execution,"his wife said as his head was cut off.How sad to die by your own laws.

Author's Note

Review please!

Reviews

[Chris]

Love how he paid the price from breaking his own law. Not as good as the other ones I read so far, but I still like the moral of the story. Someone already said that you made a couple typos, so I won't bother saying anything about 'em.

[WriterSki7]

Ah yes, the Price of Love . . . really wants to make you get married, doesn't it? It does serve the prince right. Faithfulness to your spouse is something that is to be pursued at all costs. If you can't do that, you have no business in marriage.

[Dark Angel]

Sounds like the typical guy... Sorry *shrugs shoulders* I tend to be resentful toward the male population. lol. ^_^. Oh and by the way Michael, there are a few typos... "maet" I think you want to be "met" and then it seems some of a sentence is missing... "The next day, however, he [met] a girl with shiny eyes, and silking hair and (he the night with her)." What is it supposed to say?

[Royce Y.]

wow. for only a few sentences, that was a really exceptional and unique story. how weird is it that people don't follow their own laws. go figure the world xD awesome work :)

[Sseoni]

I thought that this was a great story! Well, some rules are meant to be broken... or are they? He made the rules, and was killed by them. How sad. The story was beautifully written, wonderfully detailed, and greatly descriptive! Awesome story!

[unspokenguilt]

Awesome...

[Fallen Angel]

Dude that is just well.... what can I say. It is really good.