You are Killing Me

Finding the hopeful parts of me.

I hate you

I know I’ve said it before

I mean it tonight, I promise

I hate you

You won’t stop

You act like you never hear

You must think this is just a game

You won’t stop

I want this to end

I never want to be sitting here, like this

I can feel myself unraveling with much haste

I want this to end

You are killing me

You demand your will be followed

You chose to not notice the effect you have

You are killing me

I am breaking

I need you to stop this haunting

I can’t survive your attacks

I am breaking

You smile

You know what I don’t say

You feel my feelings

You smile

I am done

I believe your words

I want you around

I am done

You love me

You have kept me alive all these years

You care about me at my worst

You love me

Reviews

[Mockingbird]

there is a thin line between love and hate. in the end you do love the person because you said you hate him. without love there would be no hate, only apathy, and that's worse than hate...great poem.

[jennifer little]

nice write loved reading it great job

[Vertigoingnowhere]

wow! i f*****g love this! great words and flow! mind checking out aome of my stuff? thanks

[hmm]

Goodness, this is one powerful write.
I enjoyed every single word in this.
Love the closing lines, This is a wonderful write.
Awesome job!