Too young for this

Just a little while ago,

you were my little brother.

Thought I'd let you know you aren't grown,

The words you say should never come out your mouth.

Never imagined you would do such a thing,

my heart is hurting,

my emotions are boiling.

 Cause you just said something harmful indeed.

please stop,

I'm begging now.

don't make those kind of mistakes,

 You know what will be the end result.

you are still too young,

I have seen more then you.

Life is not pretty,

nor so nice.

But the road you are on now is the worst,

just come back home.

Be my little brother again,

Not this stranger that is standing here now.

Too young for this,

don't die for this,

I am afraid if you continue 

you will.

Author's Note

This has just poured out of my heart due to the circumstances in this moment. Have not edited, not sure that I can since this is just too raw a thing right now.

Reviews

[Anthony]

I am a Lezbain:( People make fun of me it makes me sad

[Kaylor Mason]

I'm a big brother myself--I have a sister eleven years younger than me. I can definitely understand and appreciate this.

[Brittany]

Raw and passionate. I think you did a good job expressing your emotions on this one. Well done.

[Allen Smuckler]

No need to edit V.J.C.
poignant and heartfelt as is....and sincere
Perhaps you should share it with your brother if you haven't already...
Nicely done
allen

[Neva Flores Smith - Cha..]

definitely raw and any reader should be able to feel the poet's pain. Well done.

[Kimberly "Melody" Carne..]

I find this very emotional, I also understand as your brother...is my son! We all come to points in our life were the pain of letting go to let one fall...seems so unnatural and wrong. This is the time you must breathe deep...let go...and let them as they may. Then be there as they learn a lesson or two.

[The Watcher]

This is a really intense and emotional poem, and I can sense the pain behind your words. Best of luck to you and kudos.

[V.J.C.]

Thanks, some times he just seems like a kid and other times.....
Yes, just a very emotional poem and thank you for the review!

[The Watcher]

You're welcome! I hope everything gets better soon too