confused

im confused
i feel like im being used
i dont know who i should love
but what the f**k
why so much confusion
why cant i get a conclusion
i think the lord's just mad
but what did i do wrong?
when i need to use my brain
he only gives me more pains
why does love excist
damn it should just b extinct
itz okay for a while
till everything shadders
then ull ask whats the matter......

these are written down words
or theyd sound much worse
but i cant get much worse
cuz no one ever whats to feel like this
it really sux to b me
cuz im a dumbass and a half now and i cant forgett how her voice sounds

Reviews

[LisetteCanWrite!]

Great flow of emotions.. and yes love can haunt us and bring pain.. when we are alone or unhappy.. we sometimes find ourselves looking back at past relations ... there sometimes will be that voice or two we miss that made us happy and we realize that it is gone.. I hope you find that special person that helps you forget all the past voices that haunt you.. that brings you peace and happiness! Thank you for sharing your writing!

[leelee]

so deep... it makes me look at the other side of love and see how it usually does go wrong. very awakening and real