Its all over

There is something different in your eyes

Maybe its time we take a break for a while

I'm just sick and tired of all those lies

You don't love me I cansee that in your eyes...

Reviews

[Babbette Francis]

Short and to the bitter point. Great Job!!

[ruth]

oh, this is the poem you showed me the other day. The poem you wrote in math class, right? well what i like about your poems(i know i have said it before, but still) is that it has so much emotion and it makes one feel its for them, idk, but it just gets to you. Like if you were writing it for someone specific, but you just say you were bored...makes me wonder.. dun dun dun dun!!!
-ruth

[Thunderlyrics]

A poem of the realization that love is not always returned to us.

Well done!