Leaving you

believe me leaving you was the last thing on my mind

but we have been growing appart over time

now you are interested in how HE looks

or too busy cought up in your stupid books

I thought i loved you but i know you're a liar

she says she wants me but she has nio desire..

I know it will hurt and I'll cry

but here's one last kiss.... goodbye

I tried to love you but you only did me wrong

I say goodbye though I'll miss you when you're gone

Reviews

[~*~Peace Keeper~*~]

This is sa and heartfelt..its hard saying goodbye but sometimes its a good thing.
Great Job

[..R.I.P..]

This is such a raw and heartfelt piece with lots emotion. You expressed your emotions well. I loved it, even though it was sad.

[Melissa Kesead]

Very short and to the point but full of vivid emotion. It always hurts when relationships don't work.

[Babbette Francis]

awww, I love it when men write. They spill everything- so tough, so strong, but so sad when a mans heart breaks. I loved this!!!

[ruth]

mr.. this doesnt sound random at all. i say people just say that just as an excuse to hide ones true emotions, and i think those emotions were expressed in this poem. my only question, who is HE?
very good..almost made me cry, cuz you express emotions very well troughout your poetry.=)
-ruth

[Katherine Wyatt]

a lot of twists here. tough emotions.. "love me when I 'm gone"...reminds me of some good lyrics...nicely done