Hero

ok,we had to had to do a really quick write on the song Hero by skillet and this is what came to me in the 5min period

I'm at the edge of breaking down

'Cause I'm quickly losing my ground

I need you here to make me...

Help me be all I can be

you're the only one that will get me to the top

until then please dont ever stop

you are the air that I breathe

you are everything I need

without you my chances of making it are zero

'Cause babe, you are my HERO

Author's Note

please give me honest feedback.. oh and consider the fact I had 5min. to write this

Reviews

I really love this write,

...This is wonderful.

[OutToLunch]

it really is good.

[..R.I.P..]

this is really good for having just 5min. to write. i'm impressed, like i always am when i read one of your poems. great job.
~Jan