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A Poem by G.A. Grim

When all seems lost

I look to you

When I can't afford the cost

I look to you

When my days seem bleak

I look to you

When my knees go weak

I look to you

When there's tears on my face

I look to you

When I can't find my place

I look to you

When I have nowhere to go

I look to you

Even when you don't know

I look to you

When my body is aching

I look to you

When my heart is breaking

I look at  you

© 2017 G.A. Grim


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this feels like lyrics to a sad song with a very nice build to it! an enjoyable read!

Posted 8 Years Ago


G.A. Grim

8 Years Ago

Thank you. Normally I would stay away from this level of repetitiveness. But I thought it would bett.. read more
redalia

8 Years Ago

yes, i totally get it, repetition is often a great tool to express obsession!

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Hello. I have been passionate about writing for many years, and would like to become better at it. I hope sharing my words with you here can help me achieve this. Thank you in advance for any feedback.. more..