You're a FAKE

Look at me with your striking blue eyes

And tell me all your hot and fancy lies

See if I will believe you this time around

You are just the fake that I had once found

 

Nothing you say strikes at me anymore

You never change, you are simply a bore

So just leave me be, set me free like a bird

And I will forget all your sappy, silly words

 

Reviews

[FRANK]

Awwwww... I know fake people all too well. I also know how it feels to hear lies from a lover. Lies from those that I have once loved seem to linger far too long. Yet, I know that is part of being human. We must all suffer betrayals, and that is, perhaps, the worst part of life. =o(

This poem is well written. You capture that anger and suffering, that accompany being betrayed, quite well. Excellent work!

Frank

[Marie]

Great plea. Great write.

[Peter J. Hodgson]

Good poem so filled with a plea for a release, its hell that your perfect opposite can also be your perfect mind-fecker!

[ganymeder]

Very angry but cool!

[Texas]

I'm sorry! Whatever I did, I'm sorry! Wait....I don't have blue eyes..... Good poem Kat-Marie. I think you sound like my mother when you get mad. I'd hate to be on the receiving end of this. Anyway, simplistic and frank and good. That's what I like.

[tamiPHOBIA.]

wowzerzz.=]]
you've got this really strong gift of making a reader believe what you sayy.
superr=D

[Ray Hamilton]

WOW glad your not mad at me LOL
Ray { Not a Poet }

[ST]

you have a scary singularity to transform simple words into ripping anger statements.

i loved it

Very strong! VERY!!!!!!! love it!

[Kena Dawn Augustine]

Plain and simple, yet put so boldly! You shout it girl! I always love those types of poems that are not afraid to speak their mind.

kena

[WordMaster]

This is a powerfully written poem
The pace of the read was perfect and the tone fit the emotion

I must say the last line trailed off somewhat for me, considering the
power and passion in all that came before

Nevertheless, still a well-written poem

Well done