TRYING TO ERASE YOU

TRYING TO BUILD IT AGAIN,MY HEART

Left with her pieces

In me

I reconstructed the building

The entablature of my heart

Managed to pump it

Recoiling its lost energy back to it

And

Learnt something that verry day

That

Lending some space in the courtyard of Ur heart is gud

But never make someone permanent there

Because

when they  leave

Their absence  kills ....�"

 

Author's Note

REVIEWS...?

Reviews

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An eraser that can erase these stains of heart by the one who left us betraying....invention of that can be highest seller!
But still for now it remains depending on time...
Emotional kar ditta!😊

[Red3Bravo]

Pretty good. I'm not sure that the misspellings are working for you, though. I'm not sure why you singled out "very", "your", and "good"for that treatment. You've definitely tapped into a universal feeling, and expressed it well.

[AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA]

THANKS MAN. I HAVE TRIED TO PULL SOME STRESS ON THE SPECIAL WORDS, IN A HOPE TO GIVE SOME MORE WEIGHT TO IT.