LUST

LUST

A Poem by AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA
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Another definition, illusion or thought about a very sacred emotion- love

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what is lust
Is it love or some random thirst
Is it a feeling or someone's touch
Is it what people call " pehli nazar ka pyar aur phir izhar "
Or
Is it something in sbke par

Some find this in small little talks
Some bind it with just a walk
Some ping it with insta stories
Some skip this under bedtime stories

Rukte chlte everyone talks about this
If not verbly , sochte to hein hi
Mind keeps churning
Ki
Akhir what is that is burning

Intuition
Delusion
Immusion
Ya
Illusion
Can't say
Par lekin kuch to hai...,!

© 2025 AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA


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The intrusion of your native tongue took me completely out of the verse because I could not understand what you were attempting to relate to your reading. If no one can relate to your message, how can anyone appreciate it?

Posted 7 Months Ago


Lust smells like love but the scent is never permanent.
I like how this poem made me look up phrases in a context I understand but in a language I'm not familiar with. It seems like an excellent way to learn new languages.

Posted 11 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA

11 Months Ago

Thanks for reading it. Which country are you from

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AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA
AKSHAYAVATA GUPTA

patiala, punjab, India



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just a bowl of imagination, where in my thoughts travel through the world of art may it be writings , poetry or sketches. seeker, learner, canon of love , gravity guy. more..