Summer Bird

Feathers fallen to the ground 

Left by birds newly grown

sing song notes flutter the air

Summer sun sinks slowly 

letting the moon greet the faces

in the warm bright night

Silent as the night sky 

the owl flies

to begin his hunt

and to end his night 

the bright red sun 

kisses the horizion

Reviews

[Ryan Henderson]

I like the haunting sense of loss that is portrayed through this piece. I get the feeling that you wrote this when you were either remorseful, angry or sad, because remorseful and sad are the primary emotions in this piece, although anger is the inspiration for many a poem. Good work :)

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you for the kindness in your review. I'm glad you enjoy my work.

[Dark Heart of Winter]

I like the rhythm to this :) its simple but evocative. Keep writing!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you very much

[A. Amos]

Again what a poetic depiction...marvelous!

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you dear friend!

[A. Amos]

You're most welcome my dear...

[Stephen]

Very refreshing piece of art. I liked the choice of words. Here, i`ve seen the whole view from sunrise to sunset .. in your short poem. Great job! ;)

[Kasey Miriam]

Thank you! great to hear from you again!