Yo

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2/12/13 

 

 

Yo 

I don’t know 

Who you are

Or if you are 

And if you are 

then what can 

I say to you 

All I know is that 

I've wanted to write to you

For a long time

 

 

Reviews

[Valentine]

Have to watch those day dreams..sometimes they can come true and bite you..Kathie

[Firestone Feinberg]

thanks for reading and commenting and for your wise words too. HAPPY VALENTINE's day! david

[sithlordjp]

"Or if you are" For some reason I found myself reading that line a few times, sounds true, as if it's holding a million questions we can,t quite answer.. A great writing, I enjoyed reading it, thanks for sharing!

[Firestone Feinberg]

You are a very kind person and a brilliant poet -- especially if you are as young as you look in the photo! Thanks for reading this poem of mine -- and yes, the line you mention in the pivotal line in the poem. The poem is supposed to be about the reader, not the writer: YOU not I. Keep writing you!

[Denham Cole]

I know that feelin' ..

You've written an impressively simplistic yet perhaps universal poem here.
I for one quite like it.

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thank you Denham. I'm new here too. Great to know you. Glad you dig the poem. Hope you post some of your verses here... --David

[Holly Mason]

this is a good one*)
thank you so much for sharing

[Firestone Feinberg]

So glad you like it, Holly. I hope all is well. You're a good friend. Thanks. --David

[Leslie Philibert]

The first poem i have read from this poet, and a good one. The street clever Yo opens up a lot of good lines, a write that opens lots of ways to understand it, good write.

[Firestone Feinberg]

Thank you so much for your kind review. I woke up this morning and this just popped into my head. Yo. Have a great day! --David