Daily Hatred

A Poem by Austin

Day after day I come home

To see you sitting there

On your stupid chair

A blank look on your face

The smell of alcohol in the air

Day by day I hate you more

But you simply don't care

So looking at the bottle in your hand with distaste

I pour it and a bit of my soul down the drain

© 2008 Austin

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sara	written really well!! the repition of "day by day" was brilliant! Posted 17 Years Ago written really well!! the repition of "day by day" was brilliant! Rating /100

Daniel

Emotion. STRONG emotion!
Nicely written, also. =D

Posted 17 Years Ago

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Added on September 21, 2008

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Austin

Robertsdale, AL

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I'm a normal guy. I got into writing in my high school's creative writing class. It really helps me get rid of built up stress. I write whatever I'm feeling so I dont have a specific genre. YAY...? We.. more..