Teach Me;

Teach me how it's done

On the dark side of the sun

Show me how you dance

In silent circumstance

Tell me how you fly

When death says it's goodbye

And takes another innocent

From a fool caused incident

Show me how you sing

When bad is all life brings

Teach me how it's done

When all the world's no fun

Show me how you smile

When nothing seems worth while

Tell me why we try

When no one can satisfy

All the endless lust

That makes materials a must

Show me how the world keeps spinning

When all there is, is endless sinning

Teach me how it's done

On the dark side of the sun

Reviews

[RachelReaper]

I like how you said dark side of the sun instead of using the obvious, "dark side of the moon" it was creative and I liked it, it was fun to read and I bet fun to write.

[Sami Khalil]

Show me how you sing
when bad is all life brings...
Nice write ...

[afra]

very deep and beautiful ....well done

[Elaenor Aisling]

This sounds like song lyrics. Good rhythm and rhyme scheme.