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She is simple. Simply defined to the atom of her being, yet, being more than just a particle she is complex. Structures that are developed upon each other like cities involving subways of hair, cross pinning each other, tangled up destination with sky scrapers beginning from her hip that extend to the foot. Her eyes are the sunrise and smile the aura that envelopes the city in a silhouette of heaven. My city is simple.  

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[Victoria PoetryBunny]

hmm i like this, short, easy and yet interesting. 'She defined to the atom her being," i really liked this line and how you used the scientific word atom. "tangled up destination with sky scrapers beginning from her hip..." really nice line loved it. :D