Humpty Dumpty

Another take on Humpty Dumpty and his fall.

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall

And 'crack' opened his head

Instantly, he was dead

Never did come the King's men

To try to put him together again

Pooled around him was his blood

Mixed in with the brown, ugly mud

And a pale white was his skin

The battle for life he could not win

So he gave in

Letting death capture him

Humpty Dumpty sat on a wall

Humpty Dumpty had a great fall

Oh poor, Humpty Dumpty is dead

And not a single tear was shed

Author's Note

My father suggested I describe Mr. Dumpty's death and I tried. What do you think?

Reviews

[oxo]

you did described humpty dumpty's death very well. :)

[Humbirdy]

Ha I just love this twist! Something I would write on my dark-hysterical days :D

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

*chuckling giddy~LOL!*

[.]

LOL seems everyone is rewriting fairy tales and nusery rhymes..great idea!

[Divine Shadows]

I like this one so much more than the original.

[Revenge<3'sMe]

I know the original, but I love this one more!!!!! The twist was wicked!!!

[MajorJesusFreak]

LOVED IT!!!!! The twist was amazing.

[Short.Nerd]

Love it! Poor Humpty Dumpty... If I didn't want to ruin my mascara (What mascara?) I'd shed a tear for him. Great job! (:

[Julie Beth]

once again it is amazing