Jack and Jill

A twist on Jack and Jill's story.

That old story of Jack and Jill

In which they had gone up that hill

And on the way down

Jack had fallen and broken his crown

Jill just filled with laughter

At poor Jack’s disaster

It was all her doing

The idea for Jack’s death had been brewing

Then she had taken action

With the proper distraction

She stuck out one of her feet

Everything was complete

Jack fell headfirst

That was probably the worst

And Jill knew she won

Her evil deed had been done

Some ask why

Did you really want him to die?

But she was never seen after

All that’s left is the echo of her laughter

Author's Note

A little something for someone that needed a little happiness. To bad it'll be a while before she reads it, but I know she was looking forward to it. XD

-Alexis

Reviews

[Amber Tasch]

this is so epic!^^

[Julie Beth]

this is so freaking amazing its so funny amazing job :)

[Alexa Tasch]

oh my god that is so crepy but friggin hilarious!!!!i love it! Yay for Jill

[justice]

This is definitely a twist! haha. I really love this idea! Twists to cliches are at the heart of poetry. You have done a very nice job with this as well. It is funny, but almost dark. haha. I enjoyed the read a lot. Thanks for sharing! All the best.
J

[Ashley]

Thanks i did like it, it did make me smile :)