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what do i see when i look at her face i see a beautiful smile

and attention grabbing eyes. i see potential leader of some sort

i see a beautiful woman.

i look at her whispering lips and think of the words they could speak

i look at her eyes and wonder what they see

i sit and wonder what are her thoughts and be able watch one of her dreams ant prey that i am in them

i wish only to be important to your life

and i only dream that you would like to share mine

 

 

Reviews

[T.K. Bruhn]

yo man i love this poem. its so deep. the lines are pure brilliance!!

[The Autumn Faerie]

These few lines really say a lot about our visions of love, I think.
I don't mind too much that there's no capitalization, but I do ask that you correct the "ant prey" to "and pray". Sorry, but I overlook the literal meaning of those errors...

But aside from that, there's a lot of feeling in this piece.