Klowns

a trip of sorts

I found a rainbow

Underneath the sea

I saw the sky

As I was digging for paper

I ate a moonbeam

While I was driving a marshmallow

 

I escape time

On a magic deli pop

I floated downward

Just because I had no place to go

I became Mojo

So I could ready my soul

I became real

In a steel revolution

 

Now I know

I know

Everything is nothing

That’s mans two handed crown

 

Author's Note

The clown picture is by a man named Marty on Deviantart.com, Hope you enjoy the poem

Reviews

[MOON]

Good write like the lines I became Mojo

So I could ready my soul

I became real

In a steel revolution

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you very much, cool line choices, I was worried about using the word Mojo but couldn't think of any other word that felt right.

[tamsin]

A clown called Marty sounds scary...I love the image of eating a moonbeam. It's magic, and a bit scary (because of the clown based subject matter)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

nice, I like scary magic, thank you for your review.

[Heather]

great imagery here, what a wonderfully exotic trip you went on.. driving a marshmallow :)

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you I'm glad you enjoyed it

[kublakhan27]

Haha sounds like a fun trip...vivid and colourful imagery^^

[Abdul Batin Osman Bey]

thank you very much.

[kublakhan27]

You're very welcome^^