The Puzzle.

I've lived on your f*****g fake lies
For months
It feels like a f*****g eternity
You f*****g fake b***h!

Your lies
Your laugh
Just you pisses me of!
You’re one of those f*****g w****s
Who’ll never find a real friend!

You’re not what I thought you were
You’re totally different from who you pretended to be
You put up a mask
You hide who you really were
A god forsaken b***h!

No one will ever like you
When they’ve seen the real you
The cruel one
The one who lies to everyone
Even your best friend!

For god sake just leave everything behind
Leave all of our s****y memories
Leave me
Leave the puzzle you made
No one can ever fix it.
You w***e just go f**k yourself!

Author's Note

Ignore Grammar Problems Please.
Honest Oppinion.

Reviews

[*skittlez*]

aewsome i really really like it hopw you do more writing love your writing alot read it all the time over and over because it is so good. I ignored grammar problems you have a little bit of mistakes on here love your writing dont ever forget that i do hope you write more and send them to me you know i will always read them:)

[Kelley]

WoW I think someones a little pissed off....smiles
This was more of a rant than a poem but I know
how it feels.

[kyrie]

This is the type of heart-felt writing that people turn to because they can't find the words on their own. The anger, the hatred, the indignance--it's all very real and just there. Super good job!

[Steph's_romantic_myster..]

The feeling of anger is mighty and provocative in this piece... It makes me want to go out and slap those who have done to me, the ways in which you express in your piece... You have a unique talent and an Awsome gift! Wonderful

[Apathy To Empathy]

Whoa...Loved it! The feeling of anger wells up and is so powerful that just in the first line, I could feel it! Amazing Write!

[Arabdha]

"A god forsaken b***h" and "A god forsaken b***h" pretty much does it..strong emotions..!!

[FallenHeroXx]

Awesome :)

Fallen