An Adventure of an Orcan

A Book by StarDreamer2010

This story is about an orcan princess who goes an adventure so she can be with her love and she finds out that true love is not all what it is made out to be.

Chapters

Chapter 1 An Adventure Begins

© 2012 StarDreamer2010

Author's Note

Please help me with action words. I have missed those words in a lot of places. Please read the story and tell me where you think action words should be placed. Also the length of the paragraphs. Should I make some longer or shorter? And dialogue. If there dialogue need, please tell where you think dialogue is needed. I am not finished with story yet, so as I complete it please tell me as the story get updated.

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koty bell

boom wam bang pow thats about all i got great write:)))

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StarDreamer2010

Bristol, CT

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I love to write stories and poetry. I hope to someday become a famous author. I want to write books for young adult readers. I am working hard everyday to attain that goal, but there are other jobs th.. more..