My home " MAMA"

it my first try who is better then a mother

you are the one who helped me grow 

taught me every thing i know

gave me your heart and seoul

made me your whole world

your sperit always flew

aroud me where ever i go

for you , i'm never old

i am made of pure gold  

no mistakes , not a flow

you never say no

you are every thing i owen

the one place i call "home"

Reviews

[K.M]

I really liked this! Just watch out for grammer :)
-Kenzie :)

[ELMAN]

thanks KENZIE , im an arabe girl not a native i will love if you show me the mistakes

[K.M]

Okay :) You just need to capitalize the i so that it looks like I :) And that is all :D

[goldifada]

Nice begining !! go for it girl .......................that's what i'm talking about :)

[ELMAN]

it is thanks to you my angle sister