The Echo of Dawn

We realize just how small we are,
while the waters of life echo from afar,
it's cool touch and taste,
sweet, salty, a magical place.

And when the dawn springs free,
a sight that all should see.
Wonder bottled in the sky,
as it rises to meet the human eye.

Reviews

[Everett DeValle]

NIIICE...I love the flow, energy, and imagery...it reminded me somewhere I think of often...and it's lovely thing when a poem like yours can do that. :)

[Aramey]

Thank you Everett, both for stopping by to read and the compliment :) I'm glad you liked it.

[Everett DeValle]

You're welcome, Aramey. :)