HUMPTY DUMPTY

Yes he had a great fall

I feel like Humpty Dumpty
Falling off the wall.
Found a few broken pieces,
But can not find them all.

Tried to protect myself,
A job not well done.
Was shot down by words,
Not by any gun.

I believe it's me,
That caused my demise.
Should have paid more attention
When I looked deep into her eyes.

There lies the portal
To every living soul.
They can not keep a secret,
It's where you pay the final toll.

It was just dream I had
Of lovers being true.
It was real for me
But wasn't real for you.

Now I'll take my sorrow
And never look behind.
For it's those other pieces
That I know I'll never find.

 

tk

Reviews

[WordShifter]

This is a great poem, flows like a river. Feel sorry for Mr. Humpty Dumpty.
Just keep the poems flowing! Aloha, Ginger

[Light and ashes]

This is a really great write. I like how you used the nursery rhyme.

[Dreamer]

This is an amazing twist to this old rhyme. Very skillfully done. Is she the other piece of u ur forced to leave without?

[brenda]

sad and tragic at the same time i like the tittle i think i only remenber the first line " humpty dumpty fell of.... yeah thts all i remneber !:)

[Kenneth The Poet]

Humpty Dumpty awesomeness.

[Tasha]

Great write.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[Mary]

this is my favorite of all your poems on here dont know why but just love the wording