ELOQUENCE

Some words to some one who is eloquent in my eyes

ELOQUENCE

 

Your writing is so eloquent,

With a mind so very sharp.
Though you be far away
Your words stay right in my heart.

The mountains and the distance,
Do keep ourselves apart.
But our minds and our words
Have given us a place to start.

With trust and by giving,
A friendship we have found.
Though we both have our egos
We keep them near the ground.

We have shared our yesterdays 
And of loves and wishes gone awry

But when talk about tomorrows,
There's a twinkle in our eye.

You say my words are beautiful.
They touch your very soul.
Say you always see my warmth.
That you never see my cold.

Did you ever stop to think
That it might just be you.
For that whIch inspires me
Are the things you say and do.

There is not much more
That I can give to you
I have given the most important thing
MY heart and a love thats true.

 

TK

Reviews

[Kat Collins]

Ah...I see the reference....thank you for such sweet, kind words! I love how you create such a rhyme without it seeming childish or too simple. It flows for you so effortlessly...beautiful. And a lucky person who inspired this poem!

[Donna Lorenz]

Thank you Donald. You are a very soft hearted man with a skill to match!