THE TEMPTER IS A SERPENT

Number four in the saga of god vs evil much more to come

 

THE TEMPTER IS SERPENT

 

The tempter he was jealous

For he had no Warrior Bride.

Tried to figure out

How to get her by his side.

The sword that She carried

Was said to be the word.

Without the sword of justice

His word would not be heard.

The tempter got to thinking

Of what he'd done before.

Thought about an apple

And how to even up the score.

He conjured up some evilness.

Which he does so very well.

Planted another apple tree

For one special clientele.

Now the apples on the tree

Where not grown to kill.

Just to make you go to sleep

So you lose your own freewill.

So he turned into a serpent

As slithery as can be.

Curled up on a branch

Waiting for his bride to be.

Now will His Warrior Bride

Be lead into temptation

Will her faith in the Lord

Be now an obfuscation.

To be continued

Author's Note

YOUR COMMENTS ON THIS ARE APPRECIATED DAMN ITS HARD TO RHYME AND MAKE SENSE SOMETIMES AND NOT SOUND LIKE 5TH GRADER OK OK A 3RD GRADER LOL

Reviews

[Kenneth The Poet]

Nice take on the second and third chapter of Genesis here.

[Rene Velez]

nice continuation, in all its biblical form...

[Tate Morgan]

This is right down my alley as it has a beautiful rhyme scheme and ells a coherent story.I love poetry that entertains and enlightens .

[Tasha]

I liked it please keep going I'd like to know what happens, and it is hard not to sound like a 3rd grader.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[brenda]

nice keep on goign evil tempter !!:)