MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR

My very first write from 2 yrs ago. A little plebeian but that is what I was at the time. Think we all need to keep the magic if we are to continue on a tour with someone that you love. Please enjoy.

A MAGICAL MYSTERY TOUR

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I am the Wizard in the land of mystery.

I am in charge of making you stay here,

However long

an unforgettable experience,

What you sense, feel and learn

On your journey through my land

Is entirely up to you.

.

Its beauty can be relentless

the aromas intoxicating.

You may feel a tingling sensation

Deep inside, it feels so familiar,

But it seems so long ago.

You are unable to remember

When or why you feel this way,

So, let us grasp our hands together,

Squeeze with all our might,

Let our hands not separate

Throughout our journey.

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For if that bond is broken

The journey will no longer produce its magic.

The mysteries that once were present,

Their portal will no longer

Beckon to be opened.

The colors, so bright in the beginning,

Shall grow dim across the sky.

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There in lies the Mystery of the Magic.

Two separate spirits bonding as one

Sharing life’s experiences,

And solving its mysteries together,

Knowing that joined as one

Their Magical Mystery Tour

Shall last them a lifetime.

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THE TARNISHED KNIGHT

Reviews

[Black]

A magical unique poem,

[brenda]

wonderful poem !:)

[Raven Starhawk]

This is a unique change from your usual writes. Maybe I am wrong but this one has a different feel. It is still well composed and a marvelous read.

[arlene krilovich]

EVEN THOU YOU WROTE THAT POEM 2YRS AGO , ITS JUST AS GOOD AS THE ONE`S YOU HAVE WRITTEN IN THE PAST TWO YRS. YOU HAVE A GREAT GIFT, I REALLY ENJOY READING WHAT YOU WRITE.

[Kenneth The Poet]

Different, but excellent nonetheless. I can see why you call yourself the tarnished knight. Very good, Donald.

[savine allen aka breezy]

i love this so much very good like always . I like the fact the words come to life in this poem awsome

[WordShifter]

This is beautiful as always, the form is different but I still like it a lot.
May your day be fashioned with joy, sprinkled with dreams, and touched by the miracles of love. Aloha, Ginger