YOUR BREAST NOW MY PILLOW

Sensous words for those needing a bit of loving hope you all enjoy my YOUR BREAST NOW MY PILLOW

 

 

Your breast now my pillow

Upon where I rest my head.
The beat of your heart
Plays a love song in my ear.

Your warm breath blowing upon my skin
Like a late summers breeze
Refreshing one on hot summers night,
Excite exotic visions in my mind.

Your breast rising and falling,
Like the beat of a love song,
They transport me to the
Most glorious of wondrous places.

Our arms now entwined, pulling us
Each into a fevorish embrace
My hands cup your tender face.
Our lips meet in a passionate kiss.

We both understand that
The time now has come
For us not to be two,
But two to be joined as one..

Author's Note

SAY I CAN WRITE WITH OUT RHYMING HOW DID DO HONEST OPINIONS PLEASE

Reviews

[WordShifter]

Your thoughts came through loud and clear and it didn't have to rhyme, well done.

[Raven Starhawk]

This was a cherished read. It gave me elements I have been searching for in poetic ways.

[Dreamer]

You made something special out of something as seemingly ordinary as someones head on an other's chest. Making the simlpiest thing romanic. Your wife most be a very happy woman. Note to self, marry a poet.lol Great job tk

[Kenneth The Poet]

This is an honestly awesome piece. Very passionate, and descriptive, TK.

[Darl]

Different side to your writing and I like it, particularly the last stanza.. very enjoyable and passionate.

[Donna Lorenz]

Very hot and steamy! Quite the read.