YOU'RE IN LOVE WITH ME

BLOOMING ROSE

I have sent you a flower
Beginning in it's womb
Sent it once again
As it began to bloom

 

You started as a Rose bud
Hidden safely out of sight

Then when I looked again
You started taking flight

 

So now I offer this
For your visual view
Something very pretty
For it's what I see in you

 

This morning what I saw
It took my breath away
For you are like this Rose
Spreading beauty every day


Go and spread your beauty
So everyone can see
And I will say my blessing
That your in love with me

Reviews

[SINDE]

The imagery exhibited by this artistic piece is remarkable.
'This morning what I saw
It took my breath away
For you are like this Rose
Spreading beauty every day

Go and spread your beauty
So everyone can see
And I will say my blessing
That your in love with me'

[Light and ashes]

I love this so sweet and beautiful. My favorite lines are the last two stanzas.

[StarSandwich]

Awh. This is just pure sweetness, I really love this. It shows the confidence he has and how lucky he is to have her, and how much he is taken by her beauty. Truly wonderful.

[Kenneth The Poet]

A rose is...

[Jacqueline Cousteau]

Lovely as a rose - as they say - hello Donald - was locked out until just now.