What is this Feeling

Sunrise in your smile,
I see hope in your eyes.
Catch me when I fall,
Through the clouds.

No tears, no pain,
When you hold my hand.
I will be there for you,
I will be there with you.

Take me away tonight,

To your paradise.
Get me so high,
With you I fly.

What is this feeling?

Rushing down my stomach, with your every touch.
What is this feeling?
When we kiss you take over my mind, you touch my soul.
What is this feeling?
That you just make me want to break down again

Reviews

[Stephen]

I think, your in love or may be blinded for love..yeah, that'd be a pretty interesting feelings touching the stomach of angels and flying up over the sky with 'em hand in hand ... I loved your poems because I can feel the scents of love through your stuffs. I liked the theme, it makes me remind how blinded the modern new age folks are on about love.

Keep it up!

[Aayushi]

Thanks...I just believe in this feeling so much and I can't help but writing about it makes me feel happy

[Stephen]

You write stuffs for making yourself happy or to be a writer??

[Aayushi]

I never thought of being a writer...but writing just transform me to some other world where I feel so complete...I just cant eplain how I feel when I write in words...

[Stephen]

Gotcha!
All the best for your writing success!