I Survive

It’s past midnight and am still awake
The dawn will break out soon.
How many days will I wait?
Wait to break free of you.

I build my castle on dunes
Hoping to change the doom
But I have to face the truth
It’s better if it’s soon.

The fairy tales I extolled
Have proven to be the pile of lies.
The dreams I chased
Should be revised.

But I won’t let my hopes die
I will fight, I will strive,
I won’t let my dreams die
For I was scared of the truth.

You can hurt my soul
But I will thrive.
Coz I don’t run away or give up
I survive.

Reviews

[Stephen]

Again the ending's filled with emotions..the emotions which get poured into the words through your heart. All the feelings you've expressed via jotting down the words. The world's wicked and it never let you feel free to live but you want to live and survive cus, you want to live your life. Nice concept!

I've read your much stuffs today and I really enjoyed them all. All the best for your upcoming new stuffs. Keep writing and don't give up! Your cool at writing stuffs and pouring the feelings of heart into the words.

Stay beautiful!

[Aayushi]

Thank you so very much...I appreciate your review. They all are very motivating.