Guardian from the Dark Places

Killing impulse getting out of control,
Loosing myself into the agony of my inner troll.
Weeping in the darkness of the night,
Scared of facing the light.

Oh I see someone walking towards me,
Extending his hand towards me.
I think he came to save me from chases,
It's my guardian from the dark places.

He came close and whisper something into my ear,
I felt relieved of all my fears.
It was a sweet sham spell,
Then he dragged me to hell.

And I thought he came to save me from chases,
It's my guardian from the dark places.

Now I am soaked in the darkness,
and I have become so hopeless.
Looking out of my window I see,
I see the moon shining in the sky.

I see the moon and I turned,
I turned into an angel.

An angel with evil flowing into my veins.
I feel tied on and am trying to be free
but I can't reach the chains that are tying me.

And I thought he came to save me from chases
It's my guardian from the dark places.

Reviews

[Saddam]

And I thought he came to save me from chases,
It's my guardian from the dark places.

interesting pattern of platform. I like it much....

[Aayushi]

Thank you so much.

[Daydreamer]

SO INTERESTING! OMG! This was a pleasure to read !! Cool you😎

[Aayushi]

Thanks Manal for your kind words.

[Daydreamer]

Welcome😁😁😁

[MsJewel]

This is so deliciously dark and creepy...gave me goosebumps.
Very well written!

:) Julie

[Aayushi]

Thanks Julie for your compliment... :)

[Utkarsh Singh]

nice theme aayushi ....every thing is alright but i don't understand one thing that why you broke the rhyming scheme ...? but its a good poem ..........liked it very much

[Aayushi]

Thanks Utkarsh and even I don't know why I broke the rhyming as I was just going with the flow.

[Utkarsh Singh]

let it b .....now its better with that only ...... :)

[Parimal Pratyush]

Exactly. Sometimes a certain someone saves us from a difficult situation but later on in life, he/she becomes the only reason for our difficult lives. Beautifully penned. :D Great work.

[Aayushi]

Thanks Parimal for your compliment.