Remember My Heart.

                

Remember My Heart.

               "My mornings are dark, my nights are freezing and my days are empty. I miss you, I miss our tears, our long hugs, our cold nights, our steady stares, and our heavenly fights. You don't know how I felt when you left, I may have a smile on but my heart is dead and buried; I may be laughing but my laugh is hoarse with pain, just not so many people can hear it. I make mistakes just like you do, maybe my flaws are inevitable and yours are divine; but I know you love them and I know you love me, and I know our love is eternal. Don't you dare, don't you ever dare for a second doubt my love, don't you dare remember my mistakes and forget my heart; I am dumb and I am weak, so don't leave me to rot, teach me; teach me to love deeper, teach me to forget easier and teach me to be smarter. I thought I understand you but I don't, you're such a galaxy, such a galaxy of dark, vast thoughts but a bright heart, and a bright mind; your stars shine and so does the beauty of your soul. I love you, and I pray to God to never lose you best friend. I implore you to forgive my fragile heart, mind and soul."

Reviews

[TheLostMind]

This is really well framed and very touching. This one tugs at the reader's heartstrings.
"Don't you dare, don't you ever dare for a second doubt my love, don't you dare remember my mistakes and forget my heart;" - you have expressed your feelings really well for a person who is not a native English speaker.

A quick thought - "If you really love someone, let them go. If they come back, they are yours forever, if they don't thy never were".

Good write.

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you so much for all your words, and yes I do agree with your thought but sometimes you are too weak to do that, however, it is complete truth!

[TheLostMind]

YWC. yes, you are right. Most of us are too weak to accept that.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Sometimes we really don't want to lose a caring heart that's our best friend. You expressed the feelings very well.

[Abeer Tarek]

thank you so much :D

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Welcome my friend :)