Smell Of Rain.

Crisp smell of rain,

saved me from my despair.

Hope enchanted me,

when strength healed the pain.

Happiness I suppose,

was worth all the tears.

I loved life when, 

rain interfered with fears.

An invisible barrier formed, 

between myself and weakness.

Reviews

[victoria]

I really like this poem. because in all honestly every time it rains i go outside barefoot in the middle opf the street and dance. it brings me so much joy it takes away my pain.

[Abeer Tarek]

This is very true indeed! I love rain and it brings me much joy too thank you :)

[M.Babu]

Nature has a way of distracting us from our petty problems(They seem bigger when they occur though). Sometimes Mother Nature has a way of reminding us that it's not the end of the world, the sun will shine again too!
Cute poem.
~M.Babu~

[??????]

I had to read this for it is pouring rain here. I liked the pose you set for this poem. I love the smell of a rain it kinda has that snuggles fabric softer smell. You can speak many things here:) I really enjoyed it:)

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you so much!

[??????]

You are very welcome:)

[The Novice]

Wow. I really like this poem, and the mood it has to offer. I would suggest coming back to this poem. Keep up the good work

[richy]

The fact that you wrote this at 16 is very impressive. continue to write and grow. This is a beautiful thought.

[Abeer Tarek]

Thank you very much it really means a lot to me!

[isus]

nice little poem :)