I Love You Girl

How I feel about my girl......

You're the first thing I think of
Each morning when I rise
You're the last thing I think of
When I close my eyes

You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny
You just don't know what you have done for me
You even pushed me to the best that I can be

Wish I could put it into words
Tell you just what it is I feel
Put my soul into a song
Prove to you it’s real

You are everything I want
You're so pure and true
I love you with everything I have
And I love everything that you do.

Author's Note

Not exactly a poem in that sense,just a random write about feelings and stuff

Reviews

[deadly healer]

a random write? it seemed like u put some thought into it. it was good.

[Bee135]

this is so cute :) I wish all boys were like this, instead of treating girls like a piece of dirt on the bottom of their shoe...

[maryjaneuy]

So sweet. ;)
Love these lines:
"You changed my world with a blink of an eye
That is something that I cannot deny"

[Anski]

great work again
u certainly create the most beautiful and sweet love poems,

[Taylor H.]

this was so sweet. Not only was the rhyme scheme amazing but the dialect was also, great job. I loved it

[Terence Foster]

oh, this is so sweet!
cant stop saying awwwwwwww

[Rachael]

haha I wasn't going to say it's cute, but looking over others' reviews, I decided that that's a good word to use. it's cute!
The audience is able to tell truly how much you like this person. There's just a tiny bit of cheesiness, and "seen this before" in it, but that's ok.
Nice job

[MissWordSmith]

awww.....

[Coyote Poetry]

It is a poem. A poem of love and thankfulness. I like the feel and desires in the poem. When we find someone that makes us content. They are the best days of our life. A outstanding poem.
Coyote