Tidewater

Inhaling deeply

pungent briny rolling air

swirling from the foam

Bathing the great sky

across the sanctuary

a bittersweet train whistle

Squishing earthen sponge

feet sunk stuck in soggy bog

shoe-sized seas emerge

Before a setting

sun, myriad tiny geysers

expose hidden clams

Reviews

[SariahM]

COOL! 100%

This piece is is very descriptive and awesome... i dont know what else to say cause im stunned!

[maria ( rose)]

Beautiful my friend ! Keep up the great work :)
-maria

[Aarea]

This is very beautiful. Your word choice creates a wonderful picture, and it reminds me of splashing in puddles as a kid. Good work, this is an impressive poem.

[Rose Jaeger Kaneki]

this is beautiful, I love this poem! Keep up the beautiful work!!!!!!!!!!!!!
:)