o lovely miss!

For thy bliss, o lovely miss! 
Thou art so cute my heart persists
 Thy charisma so hard to resist
Thy angelic eyes heavenly lit
Thy Lovely voice sounds so sweet 
But what I really adore is thy soul 
For what's there in comely beauty
 which fades away as time flees 
I know thou canst be mine
No hope that fate may shine
I shall pursue thee but that's not me 
For i don't believe in pursuit of glee

Reviews

[Nabeeha Mustafa]

I just loved this one :') Beautifully written. Great job (Y)

[Arunima]

I guess this one's my fav. among all your poems...


Beautifully penned down..

[Abilash Uttama]

I'm glad you liked it :)

[Arunima]

I didn't like it... who said i did???

[Abilash Uttama]

Ooops thanks for stopping by then :p

[Arunima]

IDIOT!!!! I meant i LOVED it!!!!

[Abilash Uttama]

Seriously?

[Arunima]

IF I DIDN'T LOVE IT, THEN HOW COME IT'S MY FAV?????

[Abilash Uttama]

Yeah you got killer point

[Arunima]

Not again! killer ,kyun?

[Abilash Uttama]

That really was a killer point

[Arunima]

Toh, tumne decide kar liya hai ki mujh jaisi bechaari, naadan ladki ko "KHOONI" saabit kar ke rahoge???:p

[Abilash Uttama]

Maine to point k liye kaha, that was killer. Who said about you being a killer?

[Arunima]

AREY, yaar... tum na baat karna sikho, seriously!! I was just joking..ur reply should have been--" yup!that's the plan..";)

[Abilash Uttama]

Are I was trying to sound like you as said earlier who said I liked it

[Arunima]

Imitating me,huh??? nice try!!!!:)how was your day??

[Abilash Uttama]

Great what about you?

[Arunima]

bada khush hai tu, aisa kya hua aaj??? me--- practiced for the debate,read the "projectile motion" part ...thade ko pareshan kiya...ek poem post kiya..so, a good day...not GREAT!!!

[Abilash Uttama]

Played badminton with sister, pc game, little chit chat with you. That's it aur physics k liye HC Verma ki concepts of physics khareed lena. Tum pehle bhi bahut logon ne suggest kiya hoga I guess.

[Arunima]

ri8,yeh suggestion pehle bhi mila hai...Ab bhai ne bola hai toh khareedna hi parega..;p toh aur kya-kya sports khel lete ho???

[Abilash Uttama]

Sirf badminton :( what about you?

[Abilash Uttama]

Sirf badminton :( what about you?

[Arunima]

outdoor mein basketball...indoor mein chess...and i know swimming if that counts!!

[Abilash Uttama]

Basketball is cool,

[Abilash Uttama]

Swimming is awesome too and chess indeed is challenging.

[Abilash Uttama]

Swimming is awesome too and chess indeed is challenging.

[Arunima]

I love it!!! basically, meri choices baaki girls se itni diff. hai ki mere saare dost mujhe "weirdo" kehte hai..ARE MY HOBBIES THAT DIFFERENT???

[Abilash Uttama]

Nahi to it's good that you like both physical and mental exercise:)

[Arunima]

chalo,koi toh mujhe "normal" samajhta hai!!!:):) actually, to be frank--- ek aur reason hai mere 'wierdo' naam ke liye.... mera dressing sense is always t-shirts and jeans.. maine na abhi tak life "salwar suit" ya "kurti" nahi pehna hai....so, they tell that main "by- chance" ladki ban gayi......;p;p

[Abilash Uttama]

Not sure what to say about this

[Arunima]

playing safe,huh???whenever in doubt--"no comment" is the safest option..:p dinner kar liya kya???i mean, online ho..toh khaana kab khaate ho??

[Abilash Uttama]

Kha liya break li thi na beech me 20 min ki

[Arunima]

dono jagah baat karna is impossible.... i'll msg...

[Deepika]

Such a meaningful piece!
My fave lines:
"But what I really adore is thy soul
For what's there in comely beauty
which fades away as time flees"

Keep writing:)

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you very much for the review Deepika and i will keep writing :) and i would suggest reading 'bird with broken wings'. It is more meaningful than this one and yes it's another read request through comment...:P, I know this makes me sound greedy for reviews but i am very much convinced you'll enjoy reading it..:)

[harshita]

beautiful poem,flows perfectly .keep it up!!!!! thanks for sharing :)

[Abilash Uttama]

thank you mam :)

[harshita]

you're welcome :)